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Freshmen should/should not be allowed to go on self pass.

"Freshmen should not be allowed to go on self pass!" There are many reasons why freshmen should not adopt self passes. The many reasons are quite different in many ways. Are such as responsibilty, many freshmen don't have the responsiblity. Why? Many freshman don't have the responibilty or maturity on this campus, they would behav wrongly out side this campus. Another reason why is that they would not manage thier time correctly. Why? Freshman are young and don't really care, from what I have heard they don't complete thier work on time. Missing a bus from self pass could lead to more and more problems. Thoose are few of the reasons why freshmen should not be allowed self passes.